March 9th, 2015

SG1_JDWhat

Answer: Writing dialogue with narrative

Our question today is how to correctly write dialogue with action/narrative. Here's an example of why this is necessary (with the detectives from Hawaii Five-0):

"Are there any malasadas left? I'm starving." Steve smiled.

"No, but we need to talk to Kamekona. We'll get you some shrimp." Danny grabbed his jacket as they both headed towards the door.

"Shrimp for breakfast?"

Kono and Chin just shook their heads as the sound of bickering faded down the hallway.
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